All Comments on 'Good Neighbor Ch. 03'

OMG PLS PLS PLS WRITE MORE I READ ALL YOUR STORIES AND WAS SOO HAPPY WHEN THIS ONE CAME OUT PLS PLS GIVE ME/US MOREEE...I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHATS TO COME OUT OF IT AND WHAT AUDREY WILL DO WHEN/IF SHE FINDS OUT...OHH PLEASEEEE WRITE MORE

This story is carrying an astonishing mix in tone--on the one hand, erotic and sensual...on the other, there is that feeling of dread behind it, as Audry is always there in the background. There is a powerful symbolic undercurrent in Rob's yearning for a family and that stable sort of life; the duality of holding to the illusion while knowing it is an illusion is very powerful. Really amazing. As always, I am awed by your vivid discriptions. You always manage to get the image across in the fewest possible words--each one prefect, none wasted. Your writing is really underappreciated.

I'm waiting for the heartbreak...