All Comments on 'Gothic Sacrifice'

You could have included MUCH MORE SEX with the Devil. The Devil should knock her up too. (You a fan of the 1960's tv show,The Prisoner?)

Loved it from start to finish!!!!!

There's too much room to carry this one further. You could have the start of a brilliant little series if you choose to continue...

What happened to Number Three? Without giving away too much for those who haven't read the story yet, I didn't understand the bit with Number Three and their games. And, what happens now? Don't leave me hanging like this!!! LOL ;-)

I had to reread the devil's little speech at the end so that I could understand exactly what he was saying. I'm not sure how you could make it just a bit clearer. Other than that, I say "Bravo!"

I really hope you continue with this story. It deserves to be completed.