All Comments on 'Graduation Party for Tommy'

get real and fantasies are for kids,grown up kids.

A very nicely done story about a generous and sexy couple both bestowing a gift and getting maximum enjoyment from it---Jackass would have loved the story if the genders were reversed.

I'm wondering if one of the previous comments came from a guy who got fired today by a boss who he found out was also screwing his wife. Geez people, lighten up. The story wasn't too bad and had some hot moments in it. The description of Tommy stroking her mound with his cock through the thin fabric of her panties was a nice touch. I for one would love to see the next chapter, where Tommy gets to fuck her.

Not very well written. Past tense is preferrable to present tense since stories generally refer to events which have already taken place. The character descriptions here are quite modest and the plot, what little there is of one, is uninteresting.

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It's decent enough as a stroke story, I suppose, though I did not find the sex scenes particularly erotic. Good fiction this is not. Thank you for your effort.

Husband tells himself he hopes he hasn't given his wife permission to fuck another guy. Wife convinces herself this isn't really full sex and she won't pick up the phone and call the kid over next chance she can. The only one being honest here is the kid.

Had a chance now to read your earlier stories, so rather puzzled that she'll happily stroke another guy's cock till he cums in his shorts and even - just a month ago - let your best friend bury himself in her pussy up to the balls, but she won't put this poor teenager out of his misery. Not only a slut, but a cockteasing slut?

Another story about a pervert. The only thing more disgusting is the idiot anon who says his wife fucked somebody else three days after the wedding and he thought it was great. Maybe Literotica should screen readers and eliminate 13 and 14 year old children from from commenting.

The Ct. Yankee

gave you 50 for trying - no author deserves less. but about your story...wife invites young hs grad to party and you're ok with it - even think it's a good idea? ...she rides leg of young lad...you feign headache...she visits bedroom but doesn't bother to get you off and you're still ok? ...you 'hope' you haven't given her permission? ...now man, who's trying to shit whom here...you are a natural born cuck and the wife may only be twenty, but she's already realized it...this is just her first time to install the antlers...and how can you see what she's doing while lying on the bed stroking your chicken? ...come on, fess up, she's in the next room getting her brains fucked out...you don't really expect us to believe that she lay back with her legs open, panties off and then decided that her one true love up in the bedroom needed her attention more...of course she fucked him...as difficult as it is for you to admit, that's what you wanted...a cuck by any other name is still a cuck...but take heart, by the time she gets through with you, you'll have enough horns that you look like a porcupine...but treat her nice 'cause she does like cock, it's just not yours...now next time, don't be so bashful...just sneak down to the guest room or wherever she's getting the pipe laid to her and enjoy the show...and by the way, if she's started with one 7 inches, you can be sure she's going to want one larger next time...that probably causes you to bust another nut.

Thanks!

But I loved it...

We enjoyed it very much. My lady friend and I look for stories like this to give us ideas for our fun and games with others.

Thanks again. Good writing.

George/Anne

Great story! Don't listen to the moralizers.

I really enjoyed your story but you should have let your wife fuck him. I can tell you from personal experience that fucking a teenage virgin is a mind blower.

Tricia

Didn't follow any of the usual patterns. Really good. As for the guys who blow their wad then call sexy couples lame, they really need to just go watch O'Reilly or something and take Literotica off their Favorites list.

However, I had to downgrade the rating because 8" cock are unrealistic and less desirable than average size.

my wife was 35 and took a 18yr old boys virginty and he fucked her 13 times that night i was jeolous of the staying power but she loved it

I got about 3/4 of the way through it and had to stop when she took my cock in her mouth.

Looking forward to more.

Silly story about our Tommy.