All Comments on 'Graduation Trip'

Oh, to be a high school senior again! I'm jealous that her trip was so much more memorable than the one I went on, but I'm going to savor reading the remainder of her stories. And I hope she is going to continue to write!

I found the scene depicting the main character getting the "sphynx" highly erotic. Oh to have two guys the same night you lose your virginity, that should happen to everyone.

Gen

these chapters of cancun should be made into a movie

i would watch them so avidly

It was plausible but for no consideraation of pregnancy or STDs. A just graduated high school senior might be indifferent to the possibility of picking up an STD - but pregnancy?

The character,and the story,would be so much better had the author dealt with that issue.