All Comments on 'Grandma's Heritage'

by Black Tulip

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
this is more mind control or non consentual

this is more about mind control theme or non consentual theme than it about Mature.

Awful ArthurAwful Arthurabout 19 years ago
Great story!

Lily’s being influenced by the past and unable to resist the older man was very erotic. Leaving the reader to imagine what he would do with her when they were alone was very effective. It's a 5.

Some stories don’t fit perfectly into any category and I think this one fit into Mature as well as it would have fit into any other category.

rgraham666rgraham666about 19 years ago
Overheating

is what I'm doing at the moment.

Damn, BT. That was GOOD!

The whole story was so erotic and sensual from beginning to end.

Such a pleasure to read.

Kay-DeeKay-Deeabout 19 years ago
Very Erotic

Most enjoyable and I found the story very erotic. Kay-Dee

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
great read BT!

hey great read here sweets...sorry i have been gone so long that i am just now reading it!

loved it though!

;)

kisses,

T

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Wow

This was hot. Very sensual, and completly thrilling.

Love, Chelly

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
It all starts with the mind

Very sensual and erotic as the intensity builds. I would love to see it build some more and get go a bit over the edge or at least right to the edge before he beds her. BT you are a talented writer.

Mr. Gentleman

maddictmaddictover 6 years ago
Such a lucky girl.

A smart beggining, to a much needed addition to her wardrobe. Any chance for more ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More

This excellent story MUST have a sequel. Please

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