by johndstories
I enjoyed this and found it interesting, but there's no sign that this is Part 1 of a continuing story. Will you be going on with it?
Thanks, ohio
i liked it but it is obviously not the end. You should let us know if it will be continued or not. If not then I should have rated it a 1 instead of the 5 starts that i gave it!
There will be more to the Universe; I aim to post once a week. The next bit on this thread will be in a fortnight in early June.
I cannot post links to my website, but I explain the concept on there! Sorry for the confusion.
he shits all over her blow 30k on hookers,gets her pregnant and evicted. and she loves him.HOW SICK IS THAT..and this story is not finished yet..time to move and and abort the embryo. WHERE is this sad and sick story going. can the author make it work???????
Poor Rhea. She has been with Simon the douchebag so long that it is almost like she thinks this is as good as she can get. Hell anything is better than Simon!!!
Though in a sick way I think Simon does love Rhea. No matter how many women he screwed she was the only one he actually said "I lvoe you" too. Not that it changes anything.
Don't know if the plan is to redeem Simon, because he is pretty irredeemable, but I am interested in seeing how this all unfolds.