All Comments on 'Guilty Viewing Ch. 02'

by MsLisa

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ammomanammomanover 10 years ago
WELL WRITTEN...

and very entertaining. Creative ideas and introductions. A lot of potential to the series Continue the same. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice teasing with the Chips.

Reminds me of my own daughter and recently granddaughter.

Both of them loved to tease me a little. My daughter did far more though.

Keep on writing.

RecHikerRecHikerover 10 years ago
5 Stars -

I gave you a 5 star rating for this chapter even though there was no incest/taboo. I understand that you are building your stroy characters and I really did like your creative style of writing.

I never turned down a peek either. I can understand the father watching his daughter, even if it was done, accidently on purpose. I've always said, I'm a full time voyeur and a part time exhibitionist.

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I love the down blouse....

Having a daughter who loves to flash with a good down blouse tease is a great touch...

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