All Comments on 'Gwen Stacy Syndrome Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
you cannot end it there

Huge fan of your work, g s syndrome in particular but really you can't end it there. I'm hoping this is setup either another series or a book 2 kind of deal because if not really anticlimactic both in a literary sense and a literotica sense. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Well that sucked. Feels like you let this story get away from you?

darkdance69darkdance69over 9 years ago
I am Confused

I liked this story to this point and really enjoyed your other work, however if this is the end I feel as if I missed the whole last 1/4 of the story. Maybe you could redeem it with a killer epilogue?

MisterZMisterZabout 9 years ago
Yeah, I hope you don't leave us hanging...

...because overall this has been a top-notch series. The humor, the dialogue, and the characterizations are great, and the sex is smoking hot, particularly in chapters 2 and 3. If Marvel ever decides to start a porn title, they need to give you a call.

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