All Comments on 'Gwen's Journey Ch. 09'

But it wrapped up rather quickly. Had to read it twice to understand how it jumped between Gabby and Ronnie at the end. Overall a complex, complicated, and ultimately well constructed story. And very uncomfortable for me to read, yes you did warn us. It did start out light and fluffy. It drew me in. I Had to finish it

Generally a VERY long story but with a somewhat exciting crime element.

There were 2 attractive characters in the story - Gabby and Steve.

Gwen/Maggie/Sandra and Ronnie were just 2 pussies on legs - they had nothing else to offer.

Too bad Steve didn't use common sense and marry Gabrielle - she, and partially, he deserved each other. - Decent people despite his incompetence as a law enforcement officer.

i m so much in love with Steve.this story really held my breath,for a moment i thought steve n gwen wont be together,you are an amazing writer.god bless u

Great story but ...