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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
good story!

I really enjoyed your story. I liked the whole idea of it and it was nicely written. where do I find this gym bunny?haha.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Incongruent

Nicola is working out naked and then has to take off her sweats to enter the sauna. Proofread, proofread, proofread!

KnickersKnickersabout 20 years agoAuthor
Not so

That's 'sweats' as in 'sweat bands'. Please read more carefully.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Fantastic piece

I loved your gym bunny! There should REALLY be a part two!!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

My wife does online yoga, and usually is naked in front of the monitor. Sometimes a tradesman comes in to fix something, and she just carries on without interrupting her routine.

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