All Comments on 'Gypsy Designs Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow

This story has just gotten better and better!!

I love it!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Eight chapters in and you're still doing it!

SHUTTER: 1: one that shuts 2: a usually movable cover or screen for a window or door 3: a mechanical device that limits the passage of light ; especially : a camera component that allows light to enter by opening and closing an aperture 4: the movable louvers in a pipe organ by which the swell box is opened

SHUDDER: to tremble convulsively : shiver , quiver

etap21etap21over 15 years ago
this is a really good story

i'm just curious: do only the men feed? aren't some of the women converted how do they feed?

are all the men born vampires?

thanks for answering....

I_ShadowI_Shadowover 15 years agoAuthor
Oh I am Shuddering!

I am so guilty of not using my thesaurus when there's a word that jumps out at me as being wrong :(

I have looked at "shutter" on numerous occasions but have keep by passing it during editing.

Thank you for bringing it to my attention!! It is being repaired and will be re-posted correctly.

~Shadow~

I_ShadowI_Shadowover 15 years agoAuthor
The woman's feeding habits...

You've been reading my mind!

I am actually adressing that in Ch.9. Gypsy also had the same question after her evening out with Cadyn, Christian and Megan.

She'd seen the men feed but Megan had remained in the car, so it made her wonder.

~Shadow~

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great stuff

Totally enjoying this story, was slightly put off with the perfection of even Megan being tied into things, but hey, it's all good in the end and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. The sex is fantastic too. As for shuttering, I got what you meant, and at least it wasn't along the lines of the very common "site" sight" mistakes...

TxirishroseTxirishroseover 15 years ago
More please

When will we be getting the next chapter...I love this story and waiting is killing me.

I_ShadowI_Shadowover 15 years agoAuthor
I'm working on it

I am trying to get Ch.9 done as soon as I can. Out of 4 people in my home all of us have been sick at the same time. Hopefully by the first of next week I'll have it finished and posted :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
yaay

i'm really lovin it soo far

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