All Comments on 'Gypsy Designs Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I just love it!

always waiting impatiently for the next instalment - thanx a million for keeping up the suspense and drama!!

shannon893shannon893about 15 years ago
Great but inconsistent

The story was great, but there are a few inconsistencies. For example, at the end of sex scene they were on a bed and her wrists weren't bound...when did they move? I reread the section, and to me, it seemed like they were always on the table with Caydn fucking Gypsy from behind.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Loved it!!!

This was another great chapter!!! Please post the next soon--it was sooooooooo nice not waiting so long!

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 15 years ago
Another good chapter.

Loved the bit with the girls in the bathroom at the party. That was classic! Still not sure how the adventurous sex fits in but I'm with you for the long haul, so I guess I'll find out. Thanks for writing!

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