All Comments on 'H Is for Helen'

more please great story

What a story! You are fast developing into my favorite author. Don't stop the stories coming! (And I won't stop cumming...)

What an amazing story. Very few can keep me hooked over 7 pages, but you managed it!

Please continue this story - one of your best to date.

That was so erotic you just have to continue. I have just discovered your work and love it. Thank You.

what a wonderful tale it should be made into a film , loved every word , more please

i must say its makes me cry ... i had my first curse to my school teacher .. he was so good to me ... but i was just 9 years then .. i dinot know what is love and sex but still at that age i want to lost with him ... now when i am going for my SRS .. i know i loved him .......................................

What a sensual yet erotic story. Lucky Helen. It would be my dream to follow the same path.

A wonderful story, Bethany! Thank you so much for sharing. You are a truly gifted writer. Having Helen be so strong and smart, and David so loving, made it all realistic yet dreamlike, a fantasy come true. Congratulations!

This is definitely a good read, beautiful buildup and a decent amount of pages (yaaay for mee) ^,^

now i want to be greedy and read more !

There are few stories I have come across that I like as much as this one. Not being one for Mammoth Mammeries, growth halting at a C cup would have made it perfect for my tastes, but this wonderful story would have lost a lil something that makes it so great.... I guess more ways than one :) I'll have to check back to see if this turns out to be a chain, or if it remains stand alone, and I WILL be checking!

Keep up the Great Work

best story I've read in a long time.

Would like to read about David and Helens next adventure.

As a crossdresser myself I loved the build-up to the pub scene and making love afterward. Very well written. Please write another chapter!

please continue

great love story

A perfect story that reminded of my youthful fantasies and feelings. I could very easily relate to Helen's reactions to feeling girly.

This is such a great story. I wish that you had written more chapters to this.

Such a heartwarming erotic story. I loved the tenderness throughout that you don't get in similar tales. Bethany you are so skilled in bringing these characters to life and giving something to every type of reader. I would love to see you back writing either continuing this story or creating a new one. I hope you are happy whatever you are doing but know that you are missed. Lots of love xxx

Well, you had me captivated throughout this story. Well done; beautifully and erotically written. All I can say is Wow. To find a "Helen" for a "David", well, that is lusciously erotic as well. So, now I get to read the rest of your works. I know I will not be disappointed. Love to hear more from you as well.

I sure wish you would continue this story. It would be great to read about Helen remaining a woman.

I love this, I just read it again... Thank you for this wonderful story...

Wow Bethany!

..... oh I hadn't finished commenting.

A very beautiful, erotic, and thoroughly heartwarmming story. I like to think David and Helen will work things out with their families and find happiness together

You are an unbelievable writer. I became totally immersed in this story. Although i admittedly am a crossdresser, I have never thought of myself as being able to have any romantic relationship with another man, but your stories have made me reconsider. If the right man ever comes into my life, I will see where our desires lead us.

Thank you!