by wishful1
I thought it was a cute story about a hot couple but then you kinda ruined it with the brother. It didnt fit the story.
I enjoy wife share stories but on this one it was so unexpected it gave the story a crappy ending.
the sharing part didn't fit in at all, plus you seem to be just a little bit sexist...
Writing's not bad at all, but putting the story into the erotic coupling (couple = two) category when it clearly belongs in either group sex or incest is sure to be an unwelcome surprise and a turn off for most readers.