All Comments on 'Haircut'

by wishful1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
cute but you ruined it

I thought it was a cute story about a hot couple but then you kinda ruined it with the brother. It didnt fit the story.

I enjoy wife share stories but on this one it was so unexpected it gave the story a crappy ending.

Venus_in_FursVenus_in_Fursover 19 years ago
lame

the sharing part didn't fit in at all, plus you seem to be just a little bit sexist...

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Definitely wrong category!

Writing's not bad at all, but putting the story into the erotic coupling (couple = two) category when it clearly belongs in either group sex or incest is sure to be an unwelcome surprise and a turn off for most readers.

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