by TheDarkCloud
honestly it started slow but got very interesting i could use a few slaves myself but they do not cum in bunches
Francis
PS:Very good i would l0ve to have that recipy
What is she to do? Will she get her revenge? I really liked this story, and can't wait for more. Perhaps Cain will have a party and his friends can enjoy Halle too. Could be interesting!
How low will Halle go? More chapters...please!
Please continue the story. More truck stops; more family/relatives; more hghpowered revenge.
I know it's weird, but I am a black female and I really get off on the race play. I just want your next installment of Halle's Hillbilly Hell to be even more over the top. (watersports, fisting, extreme degredation/humiliation) I look forward to the next installment.
I can't believe I didn't comment on this the first dozen times I read it, a painful over sight. Great story, the mind control is handled better than I've ever seen it handled in the past. The race play is great and a true rarity. Good job
If you want to write an American story, get the terminology correct. It's a trunk, not a boot.
good story so far. even making my black cock hard. i love the the thought of her loosing her freedom and being forced to be a real slave to some racist hillbillies. wonderful makes for some kinky thoughts. keep up the great work.
Really enjoyed reading how the hillbilly's got their revenge on poor Halle. Can't wait to read the other chapters now. A great story for sure.
The mother can make mind control potions and instead of selling that shit to the government or anyone else who would take an interest, she is content living in H country?
Also lawyer is misspelled as "Layer" at one point.