All Comments on 'Halle's Hillbilly Hell'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very good

honestly it started slow but got very interesting i could use a few slaves myself but they do not cum in bunches

Francis

PS:Very good i would l0ve to have that recipy

PlayfulpanthressPlayfulpanthressover 17 years ago
Poor Halle!

What is she to do? Will she get her revenge? I really liked this story, and can't wait for more. Perhaps Cain will have a party and his friends can enjoy Halle too. Could be interesting!

lipstickillerlipstickillerabout 17 years ago
More to come? Or just more cum?

How low will Halle go? More chapters...please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Unique

Please continue the story. More truck stops; more family/relatives; more hghpowered revenge.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Loving it loads

I know it's weird, but I am a black female and I really get off on the race play. I just want your next installment of Halle's Hillbilly Hell to be even more over the top. (watersports, fisting, extreme degredation/humiliation) I look forward to the next installment.

Sean RenaudSean Renaudover 15 years ago
Outstanding

I can't believe I didn't comment on this the first dozen times I read it, a painful over sight. Great story, the mind control is handled better than I've ever seen it handled in the past. The race play is great and a true rarity. Good job

Andromeda7Andromeda7almost 13 years ago

Good one , nice writing !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Bloody Hell

If you want to write an American story, get the terminology correct. It's a trunk, not a boot.

bighank100bighank100over 12 years ago
so far so good

good story so far. even making my black cock hard. i love the the thought of her loosing her freedom and being forced to be a real slave to some racist hillbillies. wonderful makes for some kinky thoughts. keep up the great work.

DarkOrange43DarkOrange43over 8 years ago
Halle's enjoyable downfall!

Really enjoyed reading how the hillbilly's got their revenge on poor Halle. Can't wait to read the other chapters now. A great story for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
great

we need more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What

The mother can make mind control potions and instead of selling that shit to the government or anyone else who would take an interest, she is content living in H country?

Also lawyer is misspelled as "Layer" at one point.

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