All Comments on 'Halloween Dare Ch. 02'

Story, well done.

Very nice twist to these stories. Creative and well written. Keep it up!

I was giggling mostly when I read the story, because I just loved the way it turned out. When I first read the 1st chapter, I was thinking maybe it was his gf that came over to keep him company, but what you wrote in this chapter was much better than what I've thought. Very clever! Couldn't wait for the next chapter(s).

I liked reading from the girl's perspective; however it was very confusing to bounce back and forth between points of view. Part of the time you used 3rd person ("Jennie felt his hand on her...") and then you switched to 1st person ("I felt his fingers slide into me..."). Please pick one and stay with it.