All Comments on 'Halloween Night'

Okay as a light first-time story, until that extremely unanticipated and unpleasant turn at the end.

Should have been under Erotic Horror, IMHO.

Decent writing, though.

in a disconcerting type of way. I guess theoretically it is a "first time" experience. but the ending kind of "killed" the mood for me, no pun intended. Horror or horrible? Hmmmm....

As story writing ability goes, I think you've done well Unfortunately I also agree that the ending was a bit of an anti-climax. You may have been better to build up that there had been murders to make it scarier, I felt the ending had been rushed and lacked excitement.

Don't be disheartened you have good talent you just need to build up your storyline a little more next time.

Best of Luck

Despite the horrific twist, I loved your tale, and I loved the vengence at the end. Bravo I say!