All Comments on 'Halloween Party Pool Game Goes Wrong'

I liked the story. Thank-you for keeping it short, but it would have been easier

to follow and read if you had used punctuation.

that you went upstairs to find Mike fucking your wife, and joined in...

How was he "tricked" in to it? He lost a bet. He sunk the 8 ball. I was waiting for the revelation of the trick promised in the story description but it never showed. 2 stars.

Str8 but I got hard reading it. TY

I love straight guys sucking cock stories, and even wrote a few. this one was awesome!

Wow! Incredibly HOT!!!