by StangStar06
...what it's all about and this robust little story is all about entertainment. It got 5 stars from this not so humble reader. Great stuff!
Every now and then I read a really Good Story .. This Is One of them .. Loved the Happy ending
Good story enjoyed
He slow to catch on to all the break ups so no sympathy for him
Little sister is great
and besides Heather was more slut than whore or house wife.
Do you know why I love these stories and get pissed off at other burns? It isn't the burn. Sluts and bastards deserve what they get. It's the attention to detail here. Heather wasn't perfect and then all of a sudden buys a chastity device and decides to emasculate her husband. Often SS06 often takes care to offer clues that the relationship was dysfunctional from the start, that the wife was never as invested. People rarely ever just change on a dime. Its a gradual process with something psychological or organic causing behavioral changes or the behavior has always been there in other ways.
Dalton was as stupid as a sled dog and that might be an insult to sled dog intelligence. I guess his stupidity and blindness was necessary for the story line. I liked the story except for Dalton's stupidity. Ignorance can be overcome. Stupidity is forever. Hope Dalton was just ignorant. More than a 4 so I give it 5*.
A perfect BTB story.... and ANON still bitches and complains! Of course, they'll never write one!
GREAT story!!! Thanks! 5/5!
"Well, if you guys were broken up at the time, isn't it okay?" - MAYBE if it's a REAL break-up, but not when it's an artificial break-up just so you can have "guilt-free" sex.
I simply cannot imagine any way that the name of the groom for a large, planned wedding is not known ahead of time. BY EVERYONE. Enjoyable except for that bit.
Mostly good, but why would they hold telling who the groom was until the actual wedding? Who wants a brawl during their wedding? Doesn't make sense.
I know it's just a story but not really believable because I don't think in the short amount of time, he could've fully love her enough to get married especially after going thru a break up like that.
My Fiancé had 2 Sisters that were both beautiful . Sadly like their sister both Sisters were Cheaters . Other then their Mom and Dad it was a messed up family .
"...as all of the blood left one head and went into the other." Damn, I love this author...
A short story well written. Creative and presented well. Folks, its called fiction for a reason.
NOT ONLY THE SLUT HEATHER BUT EVEN HER BASTARD PARENTS WERE USING THE STUPID WIMP DALTON....WHAT A LOSER MC
The wedding should have been a happy and SOLEMN occasion (NOT SOMBRE, - that's what a funeral is!). Also find PURPOSEFULLY used instead of PURPOSELY and ABJECT instead of ADAMANT. Just sayin'. :-)
I enjoyed it, and the best woman won. It was a true "Loving Wives" story.
As for the question of how he could love her in such a short time, in the story he'd loved her like a sister for the last 5 years, and she loved him from the first time she saw him. It didn't take much time after that for them to fall in love with each other. I gave it 5 stars.
“We were on a break!!!” Awesome. I love little sister stories and happy endings. The almost cat-fight was just gravy.
I liked the plot but you made it too silly, it could have been a good story, it had all the ingredients but you made it a joke read, and it didn’t make the grade
Got too zany at the end. Tossing in Heathrr getting pregnant at the end for her tryst with Luke Skyjumper (lolz) was unnecessary. As usual no woman who cheats in a SS06 story ever uses contraception. Good to see Amy had nothing in common with her cheating parents and her psycho sister Heather. Btw wouldn't be together 5 years and breaking up and making back up together like a dozen times or more not trigger his fight or flight response?
SS06 definitely has an obsession with huge breasts and butts. Not my thing. i much prefer smaller, firmer breasts and tight,round, athletic asses. Also petite women preferably under 5'3.
5 Stars on a Great story . Yes i got my oldest sister's hand me downs. But my mom made a blouse into a shirt. I loved that shirt
Stang making the heroine actually be a younger woman instead of a granny??? Lol, how did that happen?
The way this author's describe the woman in his stories.. I'm quite uncomfortable and concern with it. The author seem to actually body shame a lot of women aside from the heroine.