by StangStar06
The way this author's describe the woman in his stories.. I'm quite uncomfortable and concern with it. The author seem to actually body shame a lot of women aside from the heroine.
Stang making the heroine actually be a younger woman instead of a granny??? Lol, how did that happen?
5 Stars on a Great story . Yes i got my oldest sister's hand me downs. But my mom made a blouse into a shirt. I loved that shirt
SS06 definitely has an obsession with huge breasts and butts. Not my thing. i much prefer smaller, firmer breasts and tight,round, athletic asses. Also petite women preferably under 5'3.
Got too zany at the end. Tossing in Heathrr getting pregnant at the end for her tryst with Luke Skyjumper (lolz) was unnecessary. As usual no woman who cheats in a SS06 story ever uses contraception. Good to see Amy had nothing in common with her cheating parents and her psycho sister Heather. Btw wouldn't be together 5 years and breaking up and making back up together like a dozen times or more not trigger his fight or flight response?
I liked the plot but you made it too silly, it could have been a good story, it had all the ingredients but you made it a joke read, and it didn’t make the grade
“We were on a break!!!” Awesome. I love little sister stories and happy endings. The almost cat-fight was just gravy.
I enjoyed it, and the best woman won. It was a true "Loving Wives" story.
As for the question of how he could love her in such a short time, in the story he'd loved her like a sister for the last 5 years, and she loved him from the first time she saw him. It didn't take much time after that for them to fall in love with each other. I gave it 5 stars.
The wedding should have been a happy and SOLEMN occasion (NOT SOMBRE, - that's what a funeral is!). Also find PURPOSEFULLY used instead of PURPOSELY and ABJECT instead of ADAMANT. Just sayin'. :-)
NOT ONLY THE SLUT HEATHER BUT EVEN HER BASTARD PARENTS WERE USING THE STUPID WIMP DALTON....WHAT A LOSER MC
A short story well written. Creative and presented well. Folks, its called fiction for a reason.
"...as all of the blood left one head and went into the other." Damn, I love this author...
My Fiancé had 2 Sisters that were both beautiful . Sadly like their sister both Sisters were Cheaters . Other then their Mom and Dad it was a messed up family .
I know it's just a story but not really believable because I don't think in the short amount of time, he could've fully love her enough to get married especially after going thru a break up like that.
Mostly good, but why would they hold telling who the groom was until the actual wedding? Who wants a brawl during their wedding? Doesn't make sense.
I simply cannot imagine any way that the name of the groom for a large, planned wedding is not known ahead of time. BY EVERYONE. Enjoyable except for that bit.
"Well, if you guys were broken up at the time, isn't it okay?" - MAYBE if it's a REAL break-up, but not when it's an artificial break-up just so you can have "guilt-free" sex.
A perfect BTB story.... and ANON still bitches and complains! Of course, they'll never write one!
GREAT story!!! Thanks! 5/5!
Dalton was as stupid as a sled dog and that might be an insult to sled dog intelligence. I guess his stupidity and blindness was necessary for the story line. I liked the story except for Dalton's stupidity. Ignorance can be overcome. Stupidity is forever. Hope Dalton was just ignorant. More than a 4 so I give it 5*.
Do you know why I love these stories and get pissed off at other burns? It isn't the burn. Sluts and bastards deserve what they get. It's the attention to detail here. Heather wasn't perfect and then all of a sudden buys a chastity device and decides to emasculate her husband. Often SS06 often takes care to offer clues that the relationship was dysfunctional from the start, that the wife was never as invested. People rarely ever just change on a dime. Its a gradual process with something psychological or organic causing behavioral changes or the behavior has always been there in other ways.
and besides Heather was more slut than whore or house wife.
Good story enjoyed
He slow to catch on to all the break ups so no sympathy for him
Little sister is great
Every now and then I read a really Good Story .. This Is One of them .. Loved the Happy ending
...what it's all about and this robust little story is all about entertainment. It got 5 stars from this not so humble reader. Great stuff!
I always enjoy stangstar06 stories funny imaginative and entertaining
"That bitch! She always told me that you knew." - He knew?! How in the hell would he know she fucked around on him and not dump her ass?
She's pregnant, that's probably why she was so anxious to get back with him, so that she could claim that it was his.
"My dick shot up so fast that I got stretch marks on it." Seriously good writing and fun. Thanks for sharing.
Tickled my funny bone.
That’s something most of us who enjoy your work get off on. You’ve given us those humorous lines without repetition, so there’s always a slightly different arc in familiar stories lines.
Nicely done, once again.
2+2+1=5
Amy ended up with Dalton like she wanted and Heather ended up pregnant and most likely with an STD. It seems you reap what you sow.
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com/Ron
Hmm. I looked at the points you made to MDW and it seems to me YOU missed his point. Perhaps you should sharpen up YOUR observational skills (if any) and reread his post. For a sailor your post is about average, incorrect, mistaken and self-inflated.
In any case you seem to be far more emotionally invested in the "slut" issue than most. Perhaps from personal experience? Butt hurt much? Pew pew poor baby.
Karma has a way of working on some that never see it coming. When you fuck over someone you say you love it comes back 10 fold. I liked the story 5*
Mack/ gmail
I have no idea how you came up with that comment. IDK which story you are referring to. If, and I really mean IF!!!!!!!!, you had been paying attention like a good little reader instead of letting your prejudice against women color your perception, you'd have understood the only slut was Heather. Amy was NOT a virgin at the time he started seeing her, NOT when they met when she was 15 you moron. Additionally, when they started having sex, her experience was practically none and she'd only had sex a couple times. It was spelled out in the story and you MISSED it due to poor observational skills and poor reading comprehension. I dunno which dictionary defines that as a slut, but not any I'm familiar with. Take off your slut colored glasses and start seeing and thinking more clearly.
Amy: "From the very first day you brought Dalton home I wanted him, and unlike you I'm not going play any kind of games and I'll be faithful to him." "I've watched the 2 of you since I was 15."
Dalton: "I'd known Amy since Heather and I first met." & "Amy though not a virgin..."
Sooo, was Amy not a virgin at 15 or was her desire/love for Dalton just as superficial as Heather's and she just couldn't wait to get fucked before she got or gave up on Dalton?
I guess waiting for the one you supposedly love and want is just not possible in SS06's worlds.
One slut or another, does it really matter?
Just saying.
excellent writing. out of the 100's of authors that are here and the few I have read you are in the top 10-20 %.
Ed Grocott
edgrocott@gmail.com
Heather is what you call a loose woman very few morals and carried only about herself and I think that she got that from her Dad and a little of it from her Mom.The comment he made(since they were broken up it was OK for her to fuck around) the only thing was THEY were not broken up Heather was just out fucking every thing she could.. I would like to read more about AMY and Dalton so is there a follow up story??????
Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
All along Amy thought he knew she was cheating on him and he was OK with it. It seems Amy was tired of her sister and her parents ways they were cheaters so Heather I think thought thats what love was about. Amy was the only one in the family with morals and common mind set. She grew up and knew who she wanted and showed Dalton what a fool he was and what a whore her sister was.
Good story fun read and kinda clean. 5 stars in my favorites.
Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
that describes this situation about Making Up Your Mind. TK U MLJ LV NV
TK U MLJ LV NV = Thank you (His initials) Las Vegas Nevada.
Cheating wives are better in bed than the faithful ones.
hand me downs are the only way to go. TK U MLJ LV NV
Dalton is better off with Amy she seems to be the only one in that family with morals and common sense. Heather was like her mother and father even worse it seemed that she would spread her legs for any Tom, Dick(no matter how large or small) or Harry.
it would be nice to read a sequel about Dalton and Amy and find out what happened to Heather(Heathers story could be a stand alone story) If you have already written a sequel about Dalton and Amy what is the name of it??
Ron cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
A wedding is the biggest day of any bride to be. Most girls have a dream for their wedding planned out for years. And Amy was more than willing to ruin all that, and embarrass her new husband, all out of sheer spite! It really seemed that she was more interested in getting one over on her sister than she was in getting married. It just seemed that what she wanted wasn't just to marry Dalton, but that taking something away from her sister was more important.
Dalton might have been better off avoiding the whole lot of that fucked up family.
Which means it's an excellent effort. The authors usual score from me ranges from one star to two. Usually because of the length, and the ridiculous cartoonish characters, spastic wives and wimpy husbands that really know how to run away from their problems. This time, he did better. Solid 3 star effort.
you really don't see what someone is capable of doing to you. sometimes I think we choose to not see rather than face reality.
let's hope he is as grateful for Amy as he should be.
from the scant details provided it's not hard to imagine that Heather was probably so absorbed with her own "tragedy" to not care nor notice. You have to a special kind of selfish to do what she did to begin with so it's not too far fetched to imagine that to be the scenario.
SEEMS THAT HEATHER ENJOYED PLAYING AROUND AND OPENING HER LEGS FOR ANYONE SO SHE GOT WHAT SHE DESERVED.
AMY GOT WHAT SHE WANTED AND I LIKED THE WAY SHE PUT IT TO HER PARENTS THAT SHE WOULD NOT BE SLEEPING AROUND LIKE THEM OR HEATHER 5 STARS GOOD STORY
RON
although there are some very questionable details, you have to take them with a grain of salt to enjoy the story. I nearly fell out of my chair several times over the humorous scenes.
Don't get it; before a wedding, invitations are sent out, ads are put in papers (sometimes), word-of-mouth,etc.... Then of course it's posted at the church. Guess that Heather was Deaf, Dumb & Blind as a bat!!
It really sucks that it all comes down to being the parents fault.
DKP
Something's missing --
(( "Here," she said and wrapped her arms around me hugging me really hard. "As the night goes on you might need a few more of those. So when you do just let me know. This isn't going to be easy." )) I was expecting an all-nighter; seeing them in action!
Then shortly we see "the hook-up with Luke Skyjumper";all that we see is them "playing grab-ass" at the curb; then he's taking vacation. WTH!!! Where was the real meat & potatoes of the drama? Why didn't Amy give him evidence of other dalliances? Why wasn't the video introduced here?
I really despised Heather; really liked & admired Amy, and everyone got what they deserved!!
Thx; DKP
Always enjoyable to read a parody of what could've been when reality can be so harsh for some. This story had a great deal of humour and entertainment value but very harsh for poor Heather. Especially, when you consider her role models. How can sisters living in the same household under the tutelage of the same parents turn out so grounded? Perhaps that can be handled in another story. Thank you Stangstar06.
for a man who has, what is it poe, let me be sure to count them all, yes, now i have it ZERO, NONE, NADA, ZIP stories you have written. then maybe you should actually write one before you tell a prolific author how to write.
... but he should ground his stories in a little reality. Nobody could be as stupid as her parents were. And unless you send out blank wedding invitations, everyone invited knows the names of both the bride and groom.
has never read a stang story properly so the request for a ludicrous sequel about the replacement woman cheating will fall on deaf ears.
Where Amy cheats on him and after 512 sessions with the couples therapist it is 'revealed' that she never really loved him but only wanted to one up her big sister ?
Finding a old Stang Story that you haven't read before is like packing away a winter coat to back closet in June and discovering a fifty dollar bill in chest pocket.
After pushing thru excrement on this site finally an excellent entertainment. Thank God for Authors like Stang. Well written. 5* of course.
Makes no sense to nitpick the probables and improbables, as life is, by it's very nature, unpredictable and filled with infinite choices. SS06 has a knack for gathering and mixing action with emotion to an extent that grabs the reader --mind, body and soul. All I can add to what's already been said is that I hope SS06 has a long life and continues to entertain us for decades to come.
That's a lot of stories if he continues to write one per week.
JLRemora
However, I believe it is too illogical and improbable to rate 5***** so I rated it 4****.
One thing that is probable is parents that favor one child over the other. However, if there is not much money and that is all a family can afford, hand-me-downs are fine.
A woman with character and integrity it would appear -
Heather - another self centered bimbo with no clue what it is going on around her if it is not FOR her. Clearly you have a thing about those skanky ones lol.
It is true that "True Love is hard to find" but more true is that many times "True Love is hard to recognize". This story is so close to following what is the real path way too many people whom are truly "In Love" travel down. Standing by as Friends and yes even Family end up married and often divorced out of some out-dated feeling of Loyalty or respect ... One should follow their heart and let nature lead, I am sure there would be fewer divorced, broken marriages and abused spouse, children and sometimes even extended family members.
You have a Great Talent for writing, your imagination and refreshing way of seeing the world is commendable. Thank You for sharing.
I loved this story. I was hesitant at the blurb, but I loved it.
The only caveat I have is, down the road, when Amy's got the bile out of her system, will she still love the guy as much. But that's a different story
This is one wonderful story! Well written, well thought out and beautifully executed! If true, I wish all that is good for the happy couple! Thank you for a very refreshing point of view!
I HAD to give it a FIVE, even though it was not overly erotic. Thank you!
As others are saying, yet another great story. I love the hand-me-down theme. I, for one, also like your inclusion of something about mustangs in each story. It is something unique to you ... and I like it!!
We sincerely appreciate the way this author "gets it done".
I gave this one five stars,,, because it is one of your best yet. Please continue writing these great stories that I love to read. R.T.
I am a little brother always getting hand me downs. Well big brother saw one of my girl friends and fell for her. I said go for it but warned him that I though she was a loose. Well 12 years later she walked out leaving him and 4 kids.
She now has 2 more that are just jail bound ass holes.
ps - His second wife is a great person
pss - I now, 10 years later, found out that she was a complete slut the whole time. In fact we laugh because she still is a slut and her pussy whipped cuckold husband, the one she ran away with, doesn't understand she is that way "now".