All Comments on 'Handcuffed at Dawn'

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If everyone wrote stories of this calibre, this site would be a joy to behold. "Handcuffed" was excellently written, graphic in detail and close to several parties I attended in my youth. I am happy to have found an author to place on my favorites' list. Bob Giardino

I loved this story. It just kept getting better and better toward the end with the dirty-talking and sexual release. You can write very well. My only complaint was that, at least in the beginning, I felt at times you were being a little too flamboyant with your choice of words. I wasn't sure if you were trying to be funny or earnestly witty. That, and you dropped "whilst" over and over again... Just something weird I noticed. However, that was my only gripe, and really it's just a personal preference of diction. Your story was GREAT! Thanks for sharing!

Well written, hot and sustained. Keep it up!

This was just perfect Mark. Keep it up and keep me wet.

Always better to take the right girl! A slut will always be a slut but a loving wife is anything her man needs.

between INFER vs. IMPLY.

situation and characters so well developed

leding smoothly up the hot path to the predictable ending,

which, along with the plot itself,

leaves a lot to be guessed at, adding to the beauty!