by carbinemaster
Where is the next page, how could you do that to us avid readers. Reminds me of a brilliant movie on TV when it suddenly cut to a caption "TO BE CONTINUED" and the anguish of having to wait for it to come on again.
Brilliant story so far, just keep up the good work. Be gentle next time, I hate teetering on the edge of a cliff wondering what is going to happen next.
Peter.
Well, hopefully he is not dead because it would really screw up the story, but will be patient till you post again. Perhaps more interested in what is wrong with Hannah and it could not be a pregnancy at this late date.
This story just goes from strength to strength loving it can't wait for more
I just love this! I really appreciate the way you depict nurses and our persons in the military!
Great writing!
this time less nice ones... god this story is good... although after this chapter i am a bit sad
I have tears on my eyes after read this chapter.
I only hope that Chris survive.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Afer this page go to You Tube look up a song, "Wish you were Here" by Blackmore's Night. (It's not the Pink Floyd song) and have a listen... WOW!
As a vet myself from Australia, who was in Afghanistan, that just sent chills thru my body.......
Bad memories