All Comments on 'Happy Birthday'

Maybe your husband is somewhat lucky after all...although I doubt it.

great story it gave me an erection = )

so i started to stroke it

How about when it's your birthday i'll come over and you can suck me

...but all seemed a bit rushed. You could have developed characters, put a bit of back story, added some intrigue, discussed emotions and feelings. All seems a bit descriptive and clinical rather than erotic and exciting.

oh to have a wife like that