All Comments on 'Happy Birthday Lorie'

This story was really hot. Very descriptive. Good writing.

I gave it a five. I would have liked to see her have one more orgasm at the end, but if that's her fantasy, it should end the way she likes it. Also, I thought it could have had some explanation for who Frank was and where he came from, but after all, it's a fantasy, so that was OK too.

Not quite what I was expecting but, needless to say, I am SOOOO glad that I read it. I'm still shaking and trying to type straight...

Thanks for the story...I've bookmarked it an will read it often.

I wonder which Frank it was?