All Comments on 'Happy Ending'

Your prose did the trick: Lyrical and extremely erotic. I knew there was a bad side to this (obviously erotic horror), but I wasn't expecting the succubus angle. Nonetheless, this story drew an equal amount of arousal out of me as the protagonist.

Very interesting

I've always been interested in erotic horror and your submission was a welcome start. Detailed, erotic, and kept me hooked till the last sentence. I might have added another scene but this is your baby. Keep it up.

Annette is very seductive and powerful! love succubi!

I ask a question out of earnest concern - can you ACTUALLY cease to amaze me? I've read and reread almost all of your succubi stories and they are excellent! Detailed, highly erotic, and the fatal twist is always enjoyable. Thank you

Great little story, I've enjoyed the "Soapy Arts" a time or two, and have had some enjoyable "almost succubi" endings...

Great little read, keep at it.

BRAVO!!!! Absolutely love this.

love it

I definitely didn't see that ending coming, but nevertheless it was exciting and arousing. Nice job.

I know you've probably got a lot of stories swirling around, but I'd love to hear about what ended up happening to Mr Little's soul!

I don't comment on stories often, and that should straight up tell you how much I enjoyed it.

The pace was relaxed (as that of a massage) and the elements of the erotica weren't overdone.

You have a great way of building the story, sucking in your readers, and finishing us off with our ending. Thanks - L

Very erotic and the ending just makes it that much kinkier.

That store should start selling bottles of that Succubus fluid as a sexual lube, lots of interesting stories could come from that. Just a thought.

Story was erotically wonderful! But.. why had the poor 'good' guy had to die!? It always seemed that the succubi decided fate of their clients by tasting them first. Everything was good, i liked the massasue very much but didn't expect a dark ending. I had always thought about experiencing special massage like this once in a life but now you got me a bit scared.

My favourite story on here. In the hands of the right devilish woman happy endings can be so powerful. Wish you would do another, maybe with Annette giving a naughty phone sex session with the guy having a wicked orgasm on the stroke of midnight as part of her ritual.

Absolutely the best story I have read so far, please write more