All Comments on 'Happy Holidays Ch. 02'

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ChaamChaamalmost 13 years ago
Nice writing style.

As commented on the first part I really like your writing style! Especially the metaphors like "she looked as if an icecube wouldn't melt in her mouth". Nice language makes for about 50% of my reading pleasure!

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