All Comments on 'Happy Mother's Day Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
OMG!!

omg you have to finish this story. it made me sooo wet. i have to find out how they end and have hot wild incest sex! please finish this so we can all get off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
So.....

who gets pregnant first? This series is so hot. I can hardly wait for the series to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
FUCKING HOT!!!!

Fuck man, HURRY with the next chapter. Can't wait to see how the little cousin eats out her mom and aunty with Bran's cum in them

steve8576steve8576almost 19 years ago
KEEP 'EM CUMMING!!!!!

This series is so fucking hot! PLEASE write many more chapters! I can't wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
continue!!!!!!

please continue!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great story!

This is a wonderful storyline! Don't stop it. Make sure you keep this one going for quite some time!

WFD6301WFD6301almost 19 years ago
FUCKING AWSOME

This is the best story I have ever read. PLEASE keep it going I can't wait fot the next chapter. This is so fucking hot. I cannot beilive it. You are a great author PLEASE keep the story going. Thanks for the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Incest!!!!

Great series,keep them cumming!!! Istart reading and pre-cum is driping out of me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
superb

marvellous series, all the best of all the worlds in one story. awesome. please continueeee!!! count this one as 1000000000000000 votes

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
are u crazy

how u gonnaleave me hanging like that i was so excited to read about some hot four way or may be five sex. please finish the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Amazing

Please keep this series going, they are unbelievable!

Jena121Jena121over 16 years ago
relations

I think that Bran should get the 3 of them pregnant = all have girls and keep the tradition going - great story and we want more - more - more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great work . PleasePleasePlease continue

Great work specially teasing the waiter. Jared should join the 4some and tie Brad down and fuck Karen, Cindy, Allison. He could shave and tattoo Karen and Cindy's pussy. Get them gangbanged by bikers.

Tony StrokesTony Strokesabout 14 years ago
Where's the rest?

That's the question I find myself asking after reading this story, where the hell is the rest of it? This is a very good story and has the makings of being even better, but you've left a lot of things unresolved, namely the son taking his cousin's virginity, fucking his aunt and banging his mom some more. Please tell me and the rest of your readers that you haven't forgotten and that the next parts will be coming out soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
NICE STORY, BUT.............................

not really believable. Why would they even think about carrying on like that in a public place like that? Just can't believe it at all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ruind

you ruind a very good part one with bringing other people in to it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
ruined

Sorry,, the first chapter wasn`t very well written but was ok.. bringing other`s into it then acting like fucking retards in public then threatening the waiter like some big fucking macho goon

Think maybe you should go back to writing kiddie`s stories

You can write all the stories you want ,, just lost my entire interest

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
It would have been a 5 star, but...

you went all absurd in the restaurant. Especially the last 2 paragraphs.

Darkone57Darkone57almost 10 years ago
Keepin it up !

Thanx for the latest installment, thoroughly enjoyed it !

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Not believable at all.34 year old aunt with 18 year old daughter.48 year old Grandmother with 34 and 36 year old daughters.Most women now have kids in mid to late 20s.Try harder on future stories.

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