All Comments on 'Happy New Me'

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craigoolcraigoolover 9 years ago
Absolutely Fabulous!

Well done! Very descriptive, good action, good dialogue, very hot!

Deserves to be one in a series of a hundred!

VaranVaranover 9 years ago
Very nice

Very nice!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Enjoyed it very much. I would like it if the story continued.

Great story, it would be fun to see what other adventures Erin could have.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
amazing

loved the story wish I could be a member of a group like that

CarnaleyeCarnaleyeover 9 years ago
Hot Stuff

Nice and short story which is absolutely enchanting ushering in the new year. Just keep it going !

ThelivingwordThelivingwordabout 5 years ago
Longer stories please.

Please make your stories longer this one was awesome vut i felt like it was just warming up...

The living word

ehppmsehppmsabout 1 year ago

Took a while to get going, but good ending,

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