by Friskee_cpl
Well done! Very descriptive, good action, good dialogue, very hot!
Deserves to be one in a series of a hundred!
Great story, it would be fun to see what other adventures Erin could have.
Nice and short story which is absolutely enchanting ushering in the new year. Just keep it going !
Please make your stories longer this one was awesome vut i felt like it was just warming up...
The living word