by Kindasortacrazy
Amazing storyline and great writing style. You are really good at creating descriptions (whether it be sex scenes or environments). The only thing I can recommend is proofreading your work after a break of a couple hours, or possibly even a day. There are occasionally some errors that make a sentence confusing, but the premise is great. Keep up the good work.
I've read all your stories and had to tell you that you ARE SO really good at writing intense sex scenes. Keep it up, I love reading your stuff :)
If this was "not a good" writing of a sex scene, you'll be dynamite with practice! Great storyline - keep it rolling!
omg, this is a masterpiece. please don't stop writing. you have true talent
I just started reading your story yesterday and I love it!! Please keep writing! I'm loving the bond between Claire and the 3 demons :) Please dont let the mist get her! Lol
Finally! It was well worth the wait for this new chapter and the claiming! I almost missed the update. Could not put it down!
Keep it up! Huge fan of this story.
Each story is better then the last. Can't hardly wait for the next.
So Tarrin is only a puppet. What is so special about her that attracts other demons? I am glad that she is growing closer and more intimate with her demons. If Hell could be like that for me, I'd sign up!