All Comments on 'Havencaller'

by Kindasortacrazy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Amazing storyline and great writing style. You are really good at creating descriptions (whether it be sex scenes or environments). The only thing I can recommend is proofreading your work after a break of a couple hours, or possibly even a day. There are occasionally some errors that make a sentence confusing, but the premise is great. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great Scene

I've read all your stories and had to tell you that you ARE SO really good at writing intense sex scenes. Keep it up, I love reading your stuff :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

If this was "not a good" writing of a sex scene, you'll be dynamite with practice! Great storyline - keep it rolling!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Loved it, 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

omg, this is a masterpiece. please don't stop writing. you have true talent

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Clapping.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
LOVE IT!

I just started reading your story yesterday and I love it!! Please keep writing! I'm loving the bond between Claire and the 3 demons :) Please dont let the mist get her! Lol

SweetGaspsSweetGaspsalmost 12 years ago
Oh. My. Goodness!

Finally! It was well worth the wait for this new chapter and the claiming! I almost missed the update. Could not put it down!

Keep it up! Huge fan of this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
AHHHH I loved this one also.....

Each story is better then the last. Can't hardly wait for the next.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 12 years ago
Interesting

So Tarrin is only a puppet. What is so special about her that attracts other demons? I am glad that she is growing closer and more intimate with her demons. If Hell could be like that for me, I'd sign up!

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