All Comments on 'Having Fun with Dycke and Payne Ch. 04'

I haven't read this story in a long time. It's as much fun now as it was the first time I read it.

Oh Dear, such sloppy work. Poor punctuation, grammar and logic, I can live with. However, the most egregious error was to transfer $54M into dollars into the USA. That would immediately incur a tax charge of over $15m. That is why his Uncle kept the money overseas..