by mike z.
Wow, is right. This was very well done. Kudos to you for a great, hot, kinky love story.
Incredible. You articulate the love and trust between them perfectly, whilst maintaining that passion and desire. Brilliant.
I've been reading exotic stories (for the past 3-4 years) I've never cared to comment until this one. It was so real as if I were experiencing it, I really enjoyed this one.