All Comments on 'He Came, He Saw Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One of the very best

This was the best story I've read in a long while. You're now one of my favorite authors. You should publish.

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 9 years ago
He needs to quit wimping out with Samantha!

She is a bitch and will continually be trouble for him if he keeps letting her run over him. I guess I will look for this later because he still has to fuck Maggie. I don't care if he gets back with Katrina or not since it is just a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
disappointed

I enjoyed the story, but found several instances of words missing from a sentence, wrong words being used, and grammatical errors. It detracts.

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