by cumallday
This was the best story I've read in a long while. You're now one of my favorite authors. You should publish.
She is a bitch and will continually be trouble for him if he keeps letting her run over him. I guess I will look for this later because he still has to fuck Maggie. I don't care if he gets back with Katrina or not since it is just a story.
I enjoyed the story, but found several instances of words missing from a sentence, wrong words being used, and grammatical errors. It detracts.