All Comments on 'He Restrains Her'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Needs a slower pace and more detail

Nicely written, but I want to know what he wants and what she wants, and what he feels and what she feels, all along the way, step by step. It's too fast to the fucking.

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