All Comments on 'He Said, She Said Ch. 01'

Wow - that was one HOT story, and written like a professional. Believable, highly erotic, yet wickedly funny in many spots. If I'd been drinking while reading, I would have spurted it all over in laughter during the scene about the supply of snacks in the desk drawer! As it was, I only spurted something else as I read through the HOT HOT HOT seduction ("making love, not fucking") sequence. But who seduced whom? Looking forward to that 2nd installment. Another incredible effort, AverageBear!

If only every workplace and every worker had their very own Angela...

What an enjoyable little bit here! Hope to see part 2 soon!

Really enjoyed the blend of erotic story with wicked humor - great stuff. The dialogue brought the embarrassed naughtiness out so well. Enjoyed it a lot. One thing though; can you 'climb a learning curve'? Thanks for the read.

Hello you, once more - and thank you for a lovely, lovely story. I've always believed that sex should be pleasurable in every way, and for me humour takes it to a higher plane - a more intimate one. You handled it beautifully - to the point where I'm in danger of being envious of a fellow scribe. I'll let you off though, if the next instalment is even halfway as good as this one!

Any... er... openings at your office for an enthusiastic young lady?

Georgie

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Oh this is taking way too long! Where is chapter 2??

Loved chapter1,so 2 has to be better - no?

Great story. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to read more. Thank you for the comment on my story Lustful Lyrics as well.

Talk about seduction - your Angela is one sexy character! I could see falling under her spell myself. Anyone got some mistletoe?

And awesome fuckin'!

Good story, almost. He seems to be very self aware and then totally blows it in an instant with no real set up. Hard to believe that he'd go this overboard with no earlier signs.

Looking for a place to happen.

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