by Trip_Dalton
this was perfection the Nickelback reference ahhh amazing this is the best story ive ever read on here omfg!!!!!
Sure, it moved fast to get to the point but I truly enjoyed the writing and descriptions .... Please continue writing!
Nice little story, especially the part where mom caught them. Maybe an encore there.
Judging from the ending there's family history we should know. There could be a prequel with Dad and Aunt Ruth or we could have the talk with Mom that explains the situation. Either way we need another part. I hope you write one soon.
But the references to JC all the time really detracts from the story.
It was avwell written story, yes it could have done with a slower build up but it got there. Now as many of the other comentators have said, lets get mom involved.
I enjoyed that, great fun to read and could really be a true story. (?)
I wish there had been more foreplay when he was spanking his sister and some mention of her pubic hair. I am a huge dirty talk fan so the dialogue at the end was great! Love to here more about mom/dad.
Please continue writing chapters! I hope they are longer, too. This story is really hot! I would love if they manage to somehow get involved with Mom, too. Keep up the great work!
reminds me of fussing with my sisters,they had to be spanked too
Wonderful job on this first story. Please continue with these two and the rest of the family. Any other ideas you have would be welcome
Would love to see more of this story continued on and any other ideas you might have in the future excellent job.
One of the better stories I have ever read. Looking forward to the continuation of this tale of tails.
I really enjoyed it, it definantly made me wet haha and that ending was hilarious. .... needless to say I really enjoyed this story
Very exciting story!!Its only at the end when their Mum cried, it broke the spell!!I thought she would have joined in!!!
I liked the dialog; the verbal foreplay. Loved the way brother and sister finally cleared the air, let their guards down and got comfortable with each other. They even got playful, then they got BUSY!!! But It was almost rushed imo. Would like to have had a better description of Samantha's physical attributes, i.e. shaved, landing strip, etc. Too bad there was not more petting such as John having his way with those beautiful nipples. But it was still Hot and beautiful! And the humor! Mom's statements were priceless.
-bern1965(pending)