All Comments on 'He Spanked His Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

loved it, please continue it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
"No, it's because I really like pizza."

F.I.V.E.keks

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
fanfuckingtastic

this was perfection the Nickelback reference ahhh amazing this is the best story ive ever read on here omfg!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Well done

Sure, it moved fast to get to the point but I truly enjoyed the writing and descriptions .... Please continue writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow!

One of the best ever. Makes me wish I had a sister. More Please....

ChasBChasBover 9 years ago
Nice!

Nice little story, especially the part where mom caught them. Maybe an encore there.

ap2techap2techover 9 years ago
Well?

Judging from the ending there's family history we should know. There could be a prequel with Dad and Aunt Ruth or we could have the talk with Mom that explains the situation. Either way we need another part. I hope you write one soon.

ChrispeChrispeover 9 years ago
Very Good

But the references to JC all the time really detracts from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
well done

It was avwell written story, yes it could have done with a slower build up but it got there. Now as many of the other comentators have said, lets get mom involved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent! 5*

I enjoyed that, great fun to read and could really be a true story. (?)

talemaker333talemaker333over 9 years ago
Dialogue Fan

I wish there had been more foreplay when he was spanking his sister and some mention of her pubic hair. I am a huge dirty talk fan so the dialogue at the end was great! Love to here more about mom/dad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Keep it up

Please continue writing chapters! I hope they are longer, too. This story is really hot! I would love if they manage to somehow get involved with Mom, too. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow!

Holy shit! That was hot! Great writing! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Please continue this stort is awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
sisters are the best

reminds me of fussing with my sisters,they had to be spanked too

motordaddymotordaddyover 9 years ago
You have done a

Wonderful job on this first story. Please continue with these two and the rest of the family. Any other ideas you have would be welcome

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Excellent First Story

Would love to see more of this story continued on and any other ideas you might have in the future excellent job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

One of the better stories I have ever read. Looking forward to the continuation of this tale of tails.

TigersmanTigersmanover 9 years ago
Hot

This story was so hot! I hope you write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
dialog

great story but too much dialog and not enough description.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
really good

I really enjoyed it, it definantly made me wet haha and that ending was hilarious. .... needless to say I really enjoyed this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
sisterlove

Very exciting story!!Its only at the end when their Mum cried, it broke the spell!!I thought she would have joined in!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
wow

next please

Dream59Dream59over 8 years ago
5*s

What is to say, other than FANTASTIC!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
so why don't you write it?

And finish the story you started please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Absolutely loved it! :). Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Nicely done but more build up needed.

I liked the dialog; the verbal foreplay. Loved the way brother and sister finally cleared the air, let their guards down and got comfortable with each other. They even got playful, then they got BUSY!!! But It was almost rushed imo. Would like to have had a better description of Samantha's physical attributes, i.e. shaved, landing strip, etc. Too bad there was not more petting such as John having his way with those beautiful nipples. But it was still Hot and beautiful! And the humor! Mom's statements were priceless.

-bern1965(pending)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
wtf

dude you do know porn involves sex in it don't you.

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