All Comments on 'He Was Only 18'

This was a very good story and I fully enjoyed it. I think the idea of Jimmy bringing his son along for a "Romp in the Hay" was quite good and a very unusual approach to an erotic story. Was glad to note that the son was very skilled as a lover

Scotty

This story was hot and was written as if a genius had laid it down!

but in the middle of mickey and jon's romp, a donnie magically appeared - maybe the innocent arent as protected as you thought.. . .

Dear miss ravenswood, I thouroughly enjoyed your little tale. I had an experience much like yours a few years ago... I thought it would be a very good idea to introduce my son to the fairer sex... to give him some fatherly advice so to speak. At first my girlfriend wasn't that keen but she grew to like the idea... your story brought back some wonderful memories. Thanks again, keep writing... jim s. on south beach

Your story makes me wish I was there. Thanks.

First the story was messed up by the lack of a simple proofreading.

Secondly, the pov is supposed to be the woman's but a male tone kept leaking through in the narrative. "She" kept sounding like a dude trying to read a woman's lines in a script. The whole bit about the gals from the office added nothing to your story - just filler.

Lost me with the name Donnie....