All Comments on 'Head Games'

if you going to write an incest,make it is incest your writing about.

...but an interestingly bizarre story. Nice twist.

First let me say I'm surprised I even finished it. I think the editing needs to be worked on. I say think because it was such a bizarre plot that I'm not sure what was suppose to be there or just a typo. I don't think this is taboo though its definitely not incest. Mind control would be a great section since obvious the nurse was controlling his mind with drugs to get them to have sex together... weird but whatever.

Mrs Szabo is Roy's stepmother,Who is Myra?

What is Myra to Roy?

How is this story incest?

These questions should have been answered in the story plus others that come mind.