All Comments on 'Healer's Touch Ch. 05'

But when will the net installment be out?? I know it takes a while to write, because I'm a writer myself, but I cant help but wish that the story would progress much more quickly?!!! You have me on tenterhooks all the time.

Zara

I find myself checking several times a day, hoping that the next chapter has been uploaded!

Absolutely beatiful storyline, characters, and enough anticipation to keep me on my toes.

Don't ever stop writing, honey, you have a gift.

You had him go willingly into the water, knowing she was fine, for no other reason than to swim. Sure he made the lame comment about her dying, but she was obviously fine. All of this with the knowledge that he would get horny from the water.

If you don't acknowledge this rather pathetic attempt to subvert his own will it will seem like you have failed to understand your own plot device.

If you Do acknowledge that this was Charles' very pathetic move to overcome his own will, it makes him look weak and unable to set his own course.

Neither option is a good thing :/

J