All Comments on 'Healer's Touch Ch. 23'

Great chapter thank you for getting it in so fast cant wait for the next one

You are a writer of exceptional talent. I got hooked on Gracie and Rand's story, and loved the sidestory with Patience and Jonathon........but this has been sublime.....I can't wait to see if there is another chapter......please..............

Please tell me theres going to be another chapter! They havnt gone through the bonding yet! I love it! Please more! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

Please don't leave us hanging, keep up the great work. I am addicted to the storyline.

... right?

...you are going to write more of this...right? It can't just end there!!!!:)

Part One of the "Ceremonies" was outstanding. I'm sure we are all looking forward to the Renewal Ceremony and Kat

and Charlies' bonding....what more excitement and twists

are you going to place in their paths? Please think positively about a story for Phillip and a lady for him??

This Universe needs another great story!!

Envy really is a sin! I loved the poetic justice of it all. I hope theres more; I know theres more...has to be! More Please!

I LOVE THIS STORY, ITS THE BEST, HURRY!!!!

As usual I'm checking everyday for the next chapter....Waiting for the conclusion with all the possibilities rolling through my head.... Keep up the good work. Anticipating!

I've given consistent "5 star" ratings to

this point...BUT...but that situation on

the stage was a TOTAL CLUSTERFUCK if

I ever saw/read one...sorry, that's how I

saw it.

1) whoever the Head guy in charge of

Security just got demoted to Stableboy

and stripped of their former position

and property & 20 lashes with a wet noodle !

2)Johnathon got demoted to Space Cadet,

far to easily distracted, considering his

position (Vindexicis Warrior...not !).

3)If Jason was a "Master Vindexicis Warrior"

he should have been on instant RED ALERT

at the first disturbance, not just at the release

of the bullet...age doesn't count, he's a "Master"

4)What about everyone else that's supposed

to have powers...didn't anyone read the manual?

5)Kat's still dazed from her near fatal attack,

she has a large piece of shrapnel in her shoulder

and "Airhead" Charlie has a boner and would

rather nail Kat on stage than tend to her injuries.

WOW !! I don't know, maybe it's just me, but

(especially now with the King & Queen of Venus

present) I expected tighter security, quicker

reflexes and Charlie's (gee honey, I know you've

got a gaping wound, but how about a blow job)

totally confused priorities, just left me wondering.

HUH ??? (scratching head) What the...

Aside from that it was just OK.....ya know ?