All Comments on 'Heart of a Lion Ch. 01'

Keep going I'm very interested to see where you take it. And you have made me care about the family

to your story, its very interesting.Please continue writing

Awesome start... From this very first chapter you already have me hhoked... can't wait to see what comes next... hope to see the next chapter soon.

Congrats on your first story. That you are starting w/a series is a good thing because to end it here would just be cruel. The whole idea of Were's deciding to take 3 human siblings. Scott has had an interesting transformation. So what do the Were's plan to do next?

Again congrats on your first story

That was fun and original! When is part 2 due out? Hope it's soon! DW

Great first story m8 keep it up I'm already hooked cant wait to see how the others join the pack :)

Looking forward to more.