All Comments on 'Heart of Gold Ch. 01'

More pls

This made me hella cry! It's so realistic; great job!

Really enjoying this! Do continue...

Made me want more, please post the new chapter soon!

I really like this story, please continue!

Story has gotten my attention, but needs some editing so the reading can flow easier. Please continue...

I can't wait for more.

Thanks everyone for your wonderful and constructive comments and criticism. Chapter 2 should be posted anyday soon. I know their is some errors, but all will be forgotten with the next one. Promise

I believe that says it all, Can't wait for more! Cheers :D

I agree with nomoretears can't wait for more

Story concept is good- rich snob falls for poor kid. But didn't you even read your story when you sent it in? Sentences that make no sense because words are missing or repeated and bad punctuation and spelling make a story very hard to read and even harder to enjoy. At least read before you submit, otherwise I have to conclude you left school with a 2nd grade education.