All Comments on 'Heart of Gold Ch. 03'

I hate to say it but I think you need an new editor. A sentence straight from your story - "I want to give him the affection and need him so deserves." Huh?? I really do like the idea of this story but it is getting harder and harder to read. As with the sentence above, I know what you're trying to say but it is so very distracting having to decipher the story sentence by sentence. Please keep trying but like I said, get a new editor.

This story started out really well but now I can't seem to follow the story. There are too many things going on at the same time.

So, he's going to be a gigolo now?

This is soooooooo romantic.ur characters are adorable. I just wanna eat em up! pls give me more, this stuff is sooooooooo addictive!

The story is sweet but it needs alot of work. There are so many grammar and spelling errors that make it hard to get through. I like the conflict that Brendan is going through and hope that he doesn't betray Logan who is struggling enough as it is. I think an editor might also help you smooth the story out as well as make the obvious corrections. good luck.

Please don't let Rich give him to his boyfriend pimp, he needs love not more hurt.

Errors are distracting.

find a new editor. if you can't, i volunteer.

Ahhhh I loved it!! Can't wait for the next chapter =]

this story is so AWSOME!!!!!! i cant wait to see where it goes!! good job!

This story is very meaningful and really touches your heart!!!

I wanna read the nxt chapter.

I got all excited when i say your update and rushed to your stories to read chapter 4, but it isnt there yet.

its been 4 days lit is really taking their time proof reading, i hope that means its a long chapter??

I know, I send it through email and it may take longer than expected. I just want to say thanks to all who have been extremely patient.

Can't wait for this one to be finished. Would absolutely LOVE to see how they come together. Hoping for a REALY happy ending on this one.

That is a great way to end this can't wait to get onto the next chapter

Please for the love of writing GET AN EDITOR!!

It would be better if little steven would die, lets be honest there are just some people who deserve to be killed

Omg this is so sweet! Makes me wanna cry, so happy for them!