All Comments on 'Heart of Stone Ch. 03'

In one of the other chapters you say she just awakened him, but then you say he gathered the herbs he used on her last summer...otherwise, I really am enjoying this story.

I have really liked this chapter so far. But i was kind of wondering, what are some of the things that are expected of her as his mate? Im just curious. :)

BUT, you did really wonderfully with this chapter, and i cant wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.

hurry up, your story is by far the greatest, and i wish to read more

i absolutely love the story but you need to hurry and make another chapter i am on pins and needles here!!!

Adien is very tender and sweet and gentle with Mary. You did a great job with this chapter. I think that by the time Winter Solstice came around she had been there for months so he could have gathered the herbs in the Summer. At the beginning of the chapter the days were getting shorter and the weather was still warm.

The only complaint I have is that he calls her 'child' alot and for a lover that seems very fatherly or something a male relative would say.

Anyway, good job and I'll be looking for more from you.

I agree with the whole calling her child part.. though I can see why he might he may be her mate now but he is still older than her by far so she would seem childlike in age and she is still so innocent too but it doesn't seem right maybe find something else for him to call her that shows love but also still expresses she is an innocent..( good luck with that though cause I can't figure what that word might be.. hmmm maybe why your the writer and not me) but I do love this story I am glad that you are writing it and I also would like to know what he expects from her as his mate..cause we are all curious ..and another thing can they have kids?? just a thought.. I do love this story and so far you are doing a marvelous job of it I hope you get a chance to write LOTS more and add them all soon.. it's hard to wait for wonderful things.. but this chapter was worth a day wait or so..love it keep going..

You could get icked and think, ewww is that a perv child molester kinda thing? But the story does not have that sort of vibe. It's more like...Aiden is centuries older, and she's innocent from her upbringing. Think about loving little nicks; I call my lover baby, and who'd look at me twice for that? The reverse-I'm not a lil thing-5'7" and a fierce, hard bodied Irish brat but a lot of my lovers have been BIG men...8-10 inches taller, prolly twice my weight, and their affectionate pet names for me were kitten or lil one. It's all in the vibe, and to me, there's no ick vibe from Aidan's use of the word child.

He said he got the herbs the summer before, because he has now been awake for several months.

I love how he is slightly dominant, pressuring her to ontine but not going further than what he knows she subconsciously wants to do.

not a bad story but a bit too mills and boons for my taste.

then again looking at the dates this is one of your early works so i'll look forward to your other works. keep it up.

Okay, I am sick of hearing him refer to her as child. He is having sex with her and is still calling her, child. If my man called me that, there would be some problems. If I can get passed that ( sorry for some reason it is really annoying me) then I think it can be/ will be a good story.

I have to agree w. the ickiness of the child thing, otherwise enjoying the story.

the fact that he rips her open not once but twice, the second time causing her great pain, and ignores her cries and just keeps tearing into her, injuring her further? THAT doesn't bother anyone?

it's kind of strange how he keeps calling her child, and when he rips her open the second time he barely pauses to let her adjust. the poor girl didn't even get much of a warning!

Sorry I accidentally rated it a one... I LOVED IT 😄😃😀😆

Wow...and it was going so good until he all-but raped her. I really didn't like that part and wonder if I should stop reading this story now since if he had really cared for her, he would have prepared her MUCH better than that, gone much slower, and not have continued abusing her in such a way when he knew he was hurting her badly. Did he enjoy hurting her?