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All Comments on 'Hearts Apart'

by jack_straw

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Be original

There's a ton of these types of stories on here already. Think of something new, and come on back.

wistful_of_ozwistful_of_ozalmost 8 years ago
Dislike stories written the second person ...

.... Like, wasn't she there too? Perhaps she wasn't paying attention.

Did read it to the end but fuck knows why!

Normally like your stuff but not this one 1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
One Star

Same as every First-person Present-tense story I read here. I hate stories written that way.

NitpicNitpicover 2 years ago
Another

Another crap story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very erotic love story

NitpicNitpic11 months ago
Me

Me,I think this is just a load of crap.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Weird 2nd person narration, very long-winded, mostly boring reminisce.

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