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Yikes! Watch out for that "ass to pussy" maneuver - it can cause really hellacious infections. The flora of the lower digestive tract do NOT belong in the vaginal tract, ever!

For future, try: adding a little more description; including dialogue; exploring your feelings about the situation as it develops in greater depth. Shorter paragraphs also make the story seem less rushed. Best of luck!