All Comments on 'Heather's First Time'

A fun story! I could actually see the girls and hear them as they explored and played.

I agree it's a fun story and I too could see, hear and smell the girls as they explored. I believe this was so good that it warrants another chapter or three, ;) hehehe...

Paul

I liked the story especially how you made Heather so innocent. It was really cute the way that she didn't know about having sex. I thought that you could have made it a little more graphic in choosing your words about their body parts. I like to read about tits and cunt. Not breasts and vaginas. Other than that I thought that you did a good job of writing. Thanks BC