All Comments on 'Heather's Honeymoon Ch. 04'

I loved this chapter. This was written in such a way that vivid images formed in my head and aroused me throughout. The beach scene was portrayed down to the most minute detail.....it made me so wet while reading!!!

On the other hand the part where they were going at it around the bend with the other guy watching seemed a little far fetched to me....a little rough for my taste. Thank you.

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Thanks. Hamilton Swift