All Comments on 'Heaven'

by notabutch

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good, Good Story

You certainly have a way w/lezzie terms......very seductive!! I just left a comment on the other one!!

I love reading you!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
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GREAT story but its very sad how it turned out for u. i my self had a simaler problem(guy with gurl) but u get my point i hope u find her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
really great story

ohmigod, the end is so sad but other than that it was a pretty great story, i voted 5 stars :]

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

awww, the end makes me want to give you a giant hug. :(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
OMG

' This was such a great story but not the ending i expected ! Notabutch i truly hope you find Layla and have some sort of closure. She just packed up and left. My heart like legit feels for you. <3 .xx

Eliza Kinghorn

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
sex with heaven

heaven sounded great im a guy and had a simular expierenc

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