All Comments on 'Heavenly Love Ch. 10'

I really enjoyed reading this story, & I can't wait to read more.

This series is great keep building. In the next part have the mother shave and surprise him by flashing him in a public place.

Loved it, one of the best stories i've read

This guy acts like he's forty years old not 19 or 20, at least no one i know at that age. This story MAYBE would have been more believable if the male was a slightly your brother that got divorced and came to live with the sister and rekindled feelings from their youth.

I absolutely love your story, but still it has some points where it could've been improved a little. Now don't get me wrong the build up was phenomenal and their first time aswell. Now the male clearly has some issues, or had them seeing that some where clarified in this chapter, need to see what the next one brings. Hopefuly not such a restrained young man that has a woman that will do anything anywhere for him..... damn lucky bastard..... brings back memories.

best series ever read and written. hope u will write more just like this one. i thank you for writing this story.

I really enjoyed this series. I thought it was excellent. But in all honesty there was pretty much no plot to it; just a very long build-up. But a very good one at that.

It would've been nice if you added a bit more traits to the characters; But for what it is, it's still good.