by Kirk482002
You took this story through three chapters, and came out with the best turn of events ever! The characters were so real in their personalities that you presented, that I was trying to guess which of them would be chosen right to the very end!
Kirk, this was yet another plot that took surprise twists and turns - amid the erotic scenes so sensuously detailed - that I am still smiling and shaking my head as I write this!
A WONDERFUL job on a unique fetish story! Excuse me now - I think I will go tweeze my eyebrow to separate it into two...
The Vixxx
... since 2004? Wtf? This is a hot, twisted (in a good way) series with interesting characters and plot kinks (one hesitates to merely call them twists) and sub-plots, and nobody can comment for 9 years?
Truly a wonderful and inventive little tale...
Decisions, decisions, decisions but one actual girlfriend AND her sister with benefits with her approval seems like a great compromise! A very well thought out and written chapter. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.